Re: First Draft for comment


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Posted by Jon on November 15, 2003 at 22:25:13 from 64.63.221.104 user Jon.

In Reply to: First Draft for comment posted by Adam Quinan on November 15, 2003 at 12:49:09:

You left out WD and PM. I remember alternative endings for both (John missed the line and the white cutter smashed into another boat, IIRC, and Dot saying "we should just go" with Nancy agreeing "That would be best.").

"Jon" is Jon Barrett, if you wish.


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