Posted by Owen Roberts on October 16, 2007 at 22:49:57 from 91.125.98.52 user OwenRoberts.
In Reply to: Re: Swallowdale - the missing link? posted by Brad Henry on October 16, 2007 at 22:27:17:
You are quite right about the length of the sentence. It is exactly what was printed in the original. AR tries to break it down by the use of commas.
Unfortunately as some commas precede the word and - which is a joining word - the effect is lost.
However overall it is a good precis of SA.