Re: Writing in the first person


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Posted by Ed Kiser on October 03, 2009 at 18:23:09 user Kisered.

In Reply to: Writing in the first person posted by Ross Cossar on October 03, 2009 at 14:43:37:

In SA CH12:

He rowed on. Mate Susan, Able-seaman Titty, and the Boy
Roger watched the lights and sang out the moment the top one
showed a little to left or right of the lower one. With so many
look-out men Captain John might have been content, but just
once he looked round for himself and saw the two lights one
above the other like the stop called a colon, which I am just
going to make: there, like that. At last John just grazed a rock
with his starboard oar.

Ed Kiser, Kentucky


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