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Posted by John Nichols on March 17, 2022 at 15:42:12 user Mcneacail.

I was looking at the paragraphs at the start of Swallowdale.

He can run very long sentences and then switch to a series of short ones in the next paragraph. Each paragraph in the beginning is about one child's thoughts or one action.

He can make John comments as

Statement by John
paragraph on John
Statement by John

I was wondering why not run them together.

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